- Very enjoyable to watch - right kind of humour
- Good, tight, sharp
- Needs a re-shoot to fix camera issues
- Enjoyable to watch, matches mood of show
- Very good, well shot
- Needs to be tighter
- Check music
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Est shot-INT-UCA FASHION
DEPT.
A lightly filled classroom of student designers sit, sewing and working on varying fabrics. |
00:02
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ALFIE and ADELINE pass
by but Adeline stops, spotting a Jacket from across the room. She gestures to
Alfie and the pair enter.
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00:05
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They approach the jacket
and a STUDENT smiling at their finished work.
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00:07
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Alfie shakes the
students hand, congratulating them and distracting them in conversation as
ADELINE slips the jacket on.
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00:11
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Adeline sneaks away and
Alfie runs after her.
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00:12
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INT – MAIDSTONE STUDIOS,
GREEN ROOM.
ALFIE and ADELINE stand
in front of mirrors, checking their hair and straightening ties etc.
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00:14
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Alfie checks his watch
and the pair turn towards the door.
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00:16
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INT – MAIDSTONE STUDIOS,
HALLWAY
ALFIE and ADELINE pass
by rushing RUNNERS, carrying pairs of heels, clothes hangers and pushing
clothes rails.
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00:18
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Alfie and Adeline
approach the doors to STUDIO 2 and push them open.
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00:20
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Est shot – EXT - EMPIRE RETAIL. A mannequin stands front and
centre of a busy store front, wearing a bold jacket.
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00:02
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Two people, (ALFIE and
ADELINE) walk down the street, passing by the shop. They pause, stopping to
look at the mannequin.
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00:08
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Sharing a sly smile, the
pair enter Empire Retail.
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00:10
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INT – EMPIRE RETAL.
ALFIE and ADELINE enter the shop and immediately split up, looking around.
Adeline nods to Alfie and begins talking to the STORE OWNER.
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00:15
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With the store owner
distracted, the mannequin is pulled from the shop window.
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00:18
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EXT – SITTINGBOURNE HIGH
STREET. ALFIE and ADELINE walk confidently down the street, Alfie wearing the
jacket.
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00:23
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“A brand new fashion
show.
‘Steal the Style’”
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00:26
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‘Coming Soon’
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00:30
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