Story Telling: Development [Pitch Review]

The overall feedback from today's pitching session was quite relieving. After hearing some positive comments I am feeling a bit more confident about my idea and am excited to start working on it.

Simon praised the simplicity of the idea but suggested that I'm viewing the story from the wrong time and that I should consider setting my story just as the two characters have moved in, instead of planning to move in. Doing this will mean that my characters are actually doing something, instead of talking about doing something.

"Great comedy comes from great drama."

"Don't look to the future; write the future."