- Actuality is needed
- Needs a clearer direction - Make it more personal and make it clearer!
- Set up family - Actuality, parents relationship - did they always identify as straight?
- Ask about brother's journey of realisation to coming out
- Introducing with age looks naff
- Drop reverses and questions - not necessary and misleading
- Establish relationships between characters
- With sex more of a cultural discussion
- POSSIBLE DIRECTION CHANGE: Cultural attitude shifts, bisexuality
Friday, 12 May 2017
DOCUMENTARY: Rough Cut Review w/ZSale (12/05)
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